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Bags packed, belongings taken, people hugged.
But he looked reluctant to let go,
He looked at the temple in the room,
He looked around for the childhood he had,
He looked around for old age me might have had,
And just when he was leaving he looked around at the Kashmir he might never see again.
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Done as a part of the 55 word fiction week at Marathon Bloggers
oh, wow!!! such a powerful story told in so few words..I agree these 55ers are bringing the best out of us 🙂
thanks
I think its good to challenge ourselves once in a while 😉
Ah… the pain of leaving home. Captured well, Monika 🙂
and to know you will never return
thanks
🙂 nice one Monu
thanks crafty
That was so heartening
thanks prats
such heartache!
and so not required
Sigh ! The kashmiri pandits ?
This was well crafted..
yes the kashmiri pandits 😦
thanks
Sigh! That was so painful!
sigh indeed